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The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the popularity of three
names
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 of boys and girls in Britain from 1925 to 2000. The boys'
names
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 include
Daniel
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, Oliver, and Alexander,
whereas
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 the girls are Sophia, Isabella, and Emily. In general,
Daniel
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 was consistently the most favourable boy's name in the UK,
while
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 it was Emily for the girl.
However
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, the name of
Daniel
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 experienced a downward trend in recent periods,
in contrast
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, Emily had a significant surge.
To begin
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,
Daniel
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 which was the highest record, started from nearly 5
thousand
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 kids in 1925 to roughly just over 12
thousand
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 in the next 50 years.
Nevertheless
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, it declined steeply to around 11
thousand
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 in the
last
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 year. On the other side, Oliver and Alexander were unpopular in the first 50 years, both of those
names
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 hit the bottom at zero for Oliver and at nearly 2
thousand
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 for Alexander.
Furthermore
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, they
similarly
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 had a pivotal increase in the
last
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 period to about 11
thousand
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 and 10
thousand
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, respectively. Moving to the second graph, Emily constantly had the biggest number beyond the others, but the
overall
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 pattern was quite the same. Emily was adopted as a girl's name for nearly 2
thousand
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 people in the UK in 1925, despite that, the popularity decreased in 1950 and bounced back to approximately 11
thousand
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 in the
last
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 period. Meanwhile, there were no parents that used the
names
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 Sophia and Isabella until 1975,
then
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 both of them became very famous with around 10,000
names
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 in 2000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words names, daniel, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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