The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of British
students
at one university in England who spoke
other
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another language
other languages
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language
besides
English, in the year
of
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apply
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2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that in both years many
students
were able to use another
language
,
although
there were
students
who were only able to speak one
language
. In 2000, Spanish was the most spoken
language
that British
Students
use which was 30% of the charts.
Additionally
, there were 15%
students
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of students
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who can speak French, followed by 10% of German
language
speaker
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speakers
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. Ten years later, in 2010 the percentage of
students
who speak Spanish
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increased to 35%.
However
, those who were able to speak French was decreased to 10%.
Interestengly
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Interestingly
, there was
also
an increasing percentage of 5% from 15% in 2000 of an unidentified
language
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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