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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart gives information
how
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 many of one country's
exports
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in
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are in
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 various categories from 2015 to 2016. The table displays the number of percentage changes in each category of
exports
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 compared to 2015 and 2016
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Overall
, the majority of one country's
exports
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 were associated with petroleum products from 2015 to 2016. but, the largest growth of that
exports
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 was allocated to textiles during 2015 and 2016. In 2016, the majority of one country's
exports
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 were on petroleum products, reaching about 62 billion.
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, in 2015 the minority of
exports
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 were distributed by textiles, only 25 billion. the number of
exports
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 in 2016 exceeded from 2015 to 2016, all
exports
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 in various categories had increased. in the textiles, it increased by 15. 24
percent
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per cent
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 between 2015 and 2016. But, only gems and jewellery had a decline in the value of
exports
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, by 5. 18
percent
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per cent
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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