The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country.
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The bar chart here illustrates the portion of the Gross Domestic Product, spent towards
health
from 2002 to 2012 in 5 year
intervals, by the European Add a hyphen
5-year
contires
of Belgium, Denmark, Estonia, France, Lithuania, Luxembourg, Netherlands, Norway, Poland, Slovenia, Spain and Switzerland.
To summarise, Switzerland, Correct your spelling
countries
besides
France, had the highest health
expenditure in all three years, France spent highest
in the year Correct article usage
the highest
of
2007. Change preposition
apply
On the other
hand
the lowest was spent by Estonia in all three years.
The countries which increased Add a comma
hand,
health
spendings
areFix the agreement mistake
spending
,
Denmark, Lithuania, Norway, Poland and Slovenia. Denmark was at above 8% in 2002, Remove the comma
apply
2007
and increased to 10% by 2012. Lithuania increased to 6%, Norway Correct word choice
and 2007
upto
8%, Poland around 6% and Slovenia was more than 8% in 2012.
The countries Correct your spelling
up to
who
dropped their Correct pronoun usage
that
health
expances
areCorrect your spelling
expenses
expanses
,
Luxembourg and Remove the comma
apply
Netherlands
. Luxembourg spent 8% in 2002 and 2007, but spent below 8% in 2012. Nether lCorrect article usage
the Netherlands
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words health with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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