The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The given two circular charts provide information about pupils at
university
in the UK who can Fix the agreement mistake
universities
talk
more than one speech Verb problem
give
besides
their own language English.
In overview, in Britain, in a decade students were able to speak Fench
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French
Germany
, Spanish Replace the word
German
as well as
other dialects from 2000 up to 2010.
Initially
, in 2000, approximately 30 per cent were fluently speaking
Spanish accent, Wrong verb form
spoke
however
, after ten years almost another 5% also
learned that language which add
up together to make it 35%.Change the verb form
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Additionally
, there are some other students who understand any another
tone, Correct quantifier usage
other
this
was shown with around twenty per cent in 2000, whilst, in 2010 they were only with a percentage of 10.
Moreover
, those who can talk
two other dialects only, Verb problem
speak
they
share the same number which was around 10% during the whole period and Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
the ones who communicate
Germany Wrong verb form
communicated
remain
at the same position of exactly 10% for that decade. Wrong verb form
remained
Lastly
, French speakers commenced with 15 per cent but ended up in 2010 with a maximum percentage of 10.Submitted by cajaah93 on
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