The diagrams below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how us used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how us used to produce concrete for building purposes. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate the
step
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of
the
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cement
production and concrete production and
also
the ingredients which are used in each
steps
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and the equipment
what
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are help
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the process. First of all, as
first
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step limestone and clay are crushed by using a crusher and powdered
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ingredients.
Secondly
, the powder
entered
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a mixer mixed well and
go
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through a
cylinderical
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cylindrical
rotating heater via a bent tube.
Additionally
, the heated components
falls
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into a grinder
and
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grinds the elements and the final product is
cement
.
Finally
bags the
cement
for manufacture
Nevertheless
, 15% of packed
cement
mixed
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with 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel which is
a
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small stones, into a huge concrete mixer and mixed well to produce concrete for construction purposes. Components which are used for
cement
making and the produced
cement
and what are the ingenious for concrete production are shown the both diagrams.
Submitted by amalitharangani0Most of villagers are changing their accommodations from villages to cities all around the world. As a result of this countryside residents are lower than town areas.I think this is a negative development and in this essay, I will elaborate my perspectives furthermore. According to this situation, my take on this is, different of the facilities between the town and the village. As an example, there are lots of shopping centres in the city such as house- hold items, clothes, stationeries, vehicles and so on. Conversely, developed educational centres, schools, hospitals with enough facilities are also at the urban areas. Nevertheless, there are lots of companies and unlimited job opportunities in the city area. Also, mostly there are continuous electricity, gas,water and well planned and punctual transport system as well. So people prefer to live in comfortably and moving to cities as they possible. Additionally, villagers and town people's have same basic need. Such as food, accommodation, education, good health and freedom as well. In some countries there is unavailable electricity in the countryside. Also, there is poor transport system, teachers and facilities at village schools. Moreover, sometimes not enough medications and human resources. So countryside people preferred to move to town. Finally, countryside population decreased and urbanisation in cities. In a nutshell, if there is as usual same facilities all over the city and rural areas,as there is lots of freedom in the countryside . My point of view is around the world this point is most prominent in developing countries. on

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
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