The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
This Graphic
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The graphic
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below shows us the
of
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apply
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Export
that
happen
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happened
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in Australia for
certain
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apply
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four countries
arround
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around
the world over 2
decades
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decade
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period of time from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
Export
to Japan
make
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makes
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a downline of quantity.
Meanwhile
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Meanwhile,
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China's
Export
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exports
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achieve
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have achieved
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a grandslam with
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a significantly
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significantly increasing
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significant increase
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.
Export
to US and
india
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India
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have a
fluxtuative
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fluctuating
fluctuation
quality of
export
and
result
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result in
result from
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an average
percentage
in the
last
year. Percentages of
export
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exports
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in Japan
is start
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start
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in
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at
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above 25% and below 30% and after that
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a drop
percentage
to 20% in 1995.
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make a slowdown below 20% until 2012.
On the other
hand
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hand,
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China's
Export
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exports
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resulted
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result
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result in
result from
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a significant
increasing
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increase
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from just above 0% to the highest
percentages
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percentage
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among
of
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apply
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all four countries with 30% in 2012. US's
Export
percentage
start
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starts
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from middle between 10% to 15% ,
experience
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experienced
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up and down trends and closed by below 10% value in 2012. India
have
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had
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a similiar
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similiar
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similar
start
with
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to
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China and did not have any progress until
year
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the year
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2000.
And after
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After
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that
percentage
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of export
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export
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exports
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to
india
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India
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increasing
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increased
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untul
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until
2010 and closed by dropping once again
in
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at
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the end of 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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