The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
This Graphic
below shows us the Correct your spelling
The graphic
of
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apply
Export
that happen
in Australia for Wrong verb form
happened
certain
four countries Correct word choice
apply
arround
the world over 2 Correct your spelling
around
decades
period of time from 1990 to 2012.
Fix the agreement mistake
decade
Overall
Export
to Japan make
a downline of quantity. Change the verb form
makes
Meanwhile
China's Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Export
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exports
achieve
a grandslam with Wrong verb form
have achieved
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a significantly
significantly increasing
. Replace the word
significant increase
Export
to US and india
have a Change the capitalization
India
fluxtuative
quality of Correct your spelling
fluctuating
fluctuation
export
and result
an average Add the preposition
result in
result from
percentage
in the last
year.
Percentages of export
in Japan Fix the agreement mistake
exports
is start
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start
in
above 25% and below 30% and after that Change preposition
at
suffering
a drop Wrong verb form
suffered
percentage
to 20% in 1995. Continue
make a slowdown below 20% until 2012. Add the particle
Continue to
On the other
hand
China's Add a comma
hand,
Export
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exports
Wrong verb form
resulted
result
a significant Add the preposition
result in
result from
increasing
from just above 0% to the highest Replace the word
increase
percentages
among Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
of
all four countries with 30% in 2012. US's Change preposition
apply
Export
percentage
start
from middle between 10% to 15% , Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
experience
up and down trends and closed by below 10% value in 2012. India Wrong verb form
experienced
have
Wrong verb form
had
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a similiar
similiar
start Correct your spelling
similar
with
China and did not have any progress until Change preposition
to
year
2000. Change the article
the year
And after
that Correct word choice
After
percentage
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of export
export
to Fix the agreement mistake
exports
india
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India
increasing
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increased
untul
2010 and closed by dropping once again Correct your spelling
until
in
the end of 2012.Change the preposition
at
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