The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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below shows us the

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that

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in Australia for

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four countries

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around

the world over 2

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period of time from 1990 to 2012.

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Export

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to Japan

make

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a downline of quantity.

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China's

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exports

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significantly increasing

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.

Export

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to US and

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India

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have a

fluxtuative

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fluctuating

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quality of

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and

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an average

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in the

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year. Percentages of

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export

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exports

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in Japan

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in

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above 25% and below 30% and after that

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a drop

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to 20% in 1995.

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make a slowdown below 20% until 2012.

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hand

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China's

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exports

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result

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a significant

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from just above 0% to the highest

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percentage

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among

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all four countries with 30% in 2012. US's

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percentage

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from middle between 10% to 15% ,

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experienced

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up and down trends and closed by below 10% value in 2012. India

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had

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a similiar

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similiar

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similar

start

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China and did not have any progress until

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2000.

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that

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of export

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export

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exports

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to

india

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increasing

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increased

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untul

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until

2010 and closed by dropping once again

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the end of 2012.