Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter •explain what has happened •describe the bag and its contents •say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
#week #flight #london #plane #bag #hotel #airline #•explain #•describe #contents #•say #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is to inform you that I was travelling previous
week on flight Airbus - 250 from Paris to London, Correct article usage
the previous
where
I Correct word choice
and
forgot
my Verb problem
left
bag
in
the plane. Change preposition
on
While
commuting, I placed my bag
beneath my seat as there was minimal space in
the Change preposition
on
airplane
deck. When I reached my hotel, I was shocked to realize that I misplaced it Change the spelling
aeroplane
in
the plane.
I was carrying a black leather Change preposition
on
bag
with silver strips on it. The size of the bag
is small which
contains my Correct pronoun usage
it
personnel
belongings like Replace the word
personal
driving
license, phone charger and some cosmetics products.
I would like you to help me return it at the earliest as I am dependent on Correct pronoun usage
my driving
few
items present in it. If you need any other information regarding my Correct article usage
a few
bag
then
I can provide you the
details. I would like you to coordinate with the lost and found department to identify my Add the preposition
with the
bag
. With the description provided above, if you find my bag
, then
I would request you to reach me on my cell - +12423534443.
I hope you will promptly take required
actions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Justina MarcellaCorrect article usage
the required
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task achievement
Make sure to specify the flight number accurately, as 'Airbus - 250' does not seem like a typical flight number. It could be confused with the aircraft type.
coherence cohesion
Consider restructuring the second paragraph for better clarity. For example, 'The bag I left behind is a small black leather bag with silver strips. It contains my personal belongings such as my driving license, phone charger, and some cosmetic products.'
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is courteous and respectful, which is appropriate for a formal letter to an airline.
greeting and closing
The closing of the letter is polite and reiterates the urgency of the matter effectively.