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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
#production #levels #kinds #fuel #uk #summarise #information #features #comparison
The graph gives information about three
diffrent
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different
 essential
type
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 of fuel which are petroleum, coal and natural gas , and in the UK their
producing
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 from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
 the highest
producing
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 of
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petroleum and
the
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coal
were
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 implemented between 1981 and 1986
while
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nature
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natural
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 gas
experiened
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experienced
 fluctutaions
throughtout
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throughout
 the period . At first
glance
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 we can say that The highest amount of
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petrol was almost %140 in 1984
whereas
 it
sharp
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declaned
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declined
 in the year 1991 by %100 in the UK. The other main fuel which is
the
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coal
it
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was in the deep with just under %40 , as opposed to
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coal showed their increment only once
time
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 in 1981 by %80 . İn terms of
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natural gas in the UK it started
of
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 going up from 1991 by just above %40 to 2000 with
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percentage of %80 .
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • UK
  • coal
  • oil
  • natural gas
  • nuclear power
  • period of increase
  • period of decrease
  • stability
  • significant peaks
  • declines
  • growth trends
  • slumps
  • rapid growth
  • overall trends
  • move towards
  • move away from
  • overtook
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