Writing Task 1 you have bought some clothing onllne and are not s atisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase -> describe the problem -> explain why you need a replacement urgently Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam , Hope you are doing well. Actually , I am writing
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letter to complain about the clothing products that
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recently purchased online from your company 'AMAZON'. What
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ordered online
that
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there
was
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two pair of dresses
along with
T-shirts and trousers . I place the order for these items on 10th
july
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. It is almost , 10 days ago from now . On the website , they were showing ,
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will get these clothing pairs
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till
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15th
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and
this
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to come from 'BRANTFORD ' ONTARIO. When
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got my order , after 5 days ,
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saw
that
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the colour and the size of the clothes
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not
appropirate
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appropriate
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for that
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that
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ordered . At that time ,
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was feeling too much embraced , because I always gave more preferance to buy
everthing
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everything
from
Amazon
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app . Now, what
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want from you, please replace these items at
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earliest convenience
according to
my previous order with
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colour and size . I need it , because there is
family
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function , in which
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have to wear those dresses . I hope you will understand my situation ,
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action promptly . Yours Faithfully , Harjeet Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Try to avoid comma splices (places where two independent clauses are joined by a comma without a conjunction). Use separate sentences or appropriate conjunctions instead.
task achievement
Proofread the letter to correct minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'i' instead of 'I', 'appropirate' instead of 'appropriate', and 'preferance' instead of 'preference'.
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The letter outlines the situation clearly with all the required information about the purchase, the problem, and the need for a replacement.
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The tone is polite and suitable for a complaint letter, thus maintaining a good relationship with the company.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • purchase details
  • order number
  • type of clothing
  • amount paid
  • specific issues
  • wrong size
  • poor quality
  • damage
  • urgency
  • replacement
  • upcoming event
  • personal necessity
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