Writing Task 1 you have bought some clothing onllne and are not s atisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase -> describe the problem -> explain why you need a replacement urgently Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam ,
Hope you are doing well. Actually , I am writing
this
letter to complain about the clothing products that i
recently purchased online from your company 'AMAZON'.
What Change the capitalization
I
i
ordered online Change the capitalization
I
that
there Add a missing verb
was that
was
two pair of dresses Correct subject-verb agreement
were
along with
T-shirts and trousers . I place the order for these items on 10th july
. It is almost , 10 days ago from now . On the website , they were showing , Change the capitalization
July
i
will get these clothing pairs Change the capitalization
I
Change preposition
by till
till
15th Change preposition
by
july
and Change the capitalization
July
this
have
to come from 'BRANTFORD ' ONTARIO.
When Change the verb form
has
i
got my order , after 5 days , Change the capitalization
I
what
Correct pronoun usage
apply
i
saw Change the capitalization
I
that
the colour and the size of the clothes Add a missing verb
was that
was
not Correct subject-verb agreement
were
appropirate
Correct your spelling
appropriate
Change preposition
for that
that
Correct word choice
what
i
ordered . At that time , Change the capitalization
I
i
was feeling too much embraced , because I always gave more preferance to buy Change the capitalization
I
everthing
from Correct your spelling
everything
Amazon
app .
Now, what Correct article usage
the Amazon
i
want from you, please replace these items at Change the capitalization
I
the
earliest convenience Change the word
your
according to
my previous order with same
colour and size . I need it , because there is Correct article usage
the same
family
function , in which Add an article
a family
i
have to wear those dresses .
I hope you will understand my situation , Change the capitalization
I
take
Correct word choice
and take
the
action promptly .
Yours Faithfully ,
Harjeet KaurCorrect article usage
apply
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coherence cohesion
Try to avoid comma splices (places where two independent clauses are joined by a comma without a conjunction). Use separate sentences or appropriate conjunctions instead.
task achievement
Proofread the letter to correct minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'i' instead of 'I', 'appropirate' instead of 'appropriate', and 'preferance' instead of 'preference'.
task achievement
The letter outlines the situation clearly with all the required information about the purchase, the problem, and the need for a replacement.
task achievement
The tone is polite and suitable for a complaint letter, thus maintaining a good relationship with the company.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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