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The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country. European Health Expenditure as Percentage of Gross Domestic Product, 2002, 2007 and 2012

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should * GDP (Gross Domestic Product) is the total value of goods that are made and services that are provided in a country. European Health Expenditure as Percentage of Gross Domestic Product, 2002, 2007 and 2012
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The bar chart represents the health expenditure totals as GPD for various European countries in the
years
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 2002,2007 and 2012 In an overview
Switzerland
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 , Belgium , Estonia and Spain maintained similar values in all
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three
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 . Lithuania ,Norway , Poland and Slovenia showed more values for
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 in 2012 than the other
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 . France is the only country with different values for all
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three
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. The
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 percentage of
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 which is around 11 % is more
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 times that of Estonia which is the country with
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GDP
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 Percentage at around 3%. France which was
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 par with
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 in 2007 had reduced to less than 10 % in 2012. Luxembourg
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France with a reduction in
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 in 2012. Belgium had maintained a steady second position at 10 % throughout the
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 .In 2012 there were only four countries with
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 more than 10% and those countries were Belgium , Denmark , Norway and
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, switzerland, gdp with synonyms.
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