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The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs depict New Zealand import
figures
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 from
Australia
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 and
Japan
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 from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
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, import
figures
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 from
Australia
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 start higher than from
Japan
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. Over the
period
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imports
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 from
Australia
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 increased from 4000
NZ
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million
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 to 8000
NZ
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million
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.
However
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,
figures
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 show that
imports
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 from
Japan
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 decreased over the
period
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, which started with 3000
NZ
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 $
million
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 and finished in 2000. In the first 2 years
period
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, we can see an upward trend in import
figures
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 from both countries. After 1996,
imports
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 from
Australia
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 started to decrease steadily,
while
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 from
Japan
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 they continued to increase gradually. In 1999, the most significant dip was observed, which the
figures
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 for
imports
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 from
Australia
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 were 3000
NZ
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million
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. After that, we can see the spike until the first half of 2000. The
figures
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 dipped to 5000 and increased gradually again. Regarding
imports
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 from
Japan
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, the peak was
at the end
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 of 1996, which was roughly 6000
NZ
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 $
million
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. The graph shows the
figures
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 fluctuated over the
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figures, australia, japan, period, imports, nz, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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