the chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph
illusterates
a Correct your spelling
illustrates
county's
amount of money earned from exporting 5 various Correct your spelling
country's
items
in 2015 and 2016, and the table demonstartes
the shifts in Correct your spelling
demonstrates
values
of each exported item in two
years period. As Correct determiner usage
a
it
can be seen in the graph, the export earnings during a year for each item Correct pronoun usage
apply
does
not vary significantly, Correct subject-verb agreement
do
however
there is a difference in the percentage of changes in the Add a comma
however,
values
of each product from 2015 to 2016.
First,
the bar indicates that the general revenue of the exported products
were
quite similar in both years. Change the verb form
was
However
, petroleum products
and engineered goods satnd
at the top of the earnings of Correct your spelling
stand
exporeted
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exported
items
list compared to other country's product
in both years. Fix the agreement mistake
products
Furthermore
Textiles with the
earnings of approximately 30 Correct article usage
apply
billions
in 2015 and 2016 Change to singular
billion
state
lower than other Correct your spelling
are
items
in the graph.
Secondly
, The table shows the changing pattern in the values
of the products
. In fact, Textiles with 15.24
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a 15.24
percentage
rise had the highest Replace the word
per cent
value
shift, while
agricultural products
had almost 0.1 growth in the
price. Furthur petroleum Correct article usage
apply
products
and engineered goods as the most exported items
had an
slight increase in the Change the article
a
value
. Finally
, gems
and Correct article usage
the gems
jewelleries
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jewellery
pieces of jewellery
value
percentage shows a 5.18 percent
fall.
In conclusion, Change the spelling
per cent
it is clear that
the earnigs
of the all Correct your spelling
earnings
products
seemed to stay steady from 2015 until 2016, whereas
, the export income paterns
of each item Correct your spelling
patterns
diffrs
from others. Correct your spelling
differ
Additionally
, the table provides inforamtion
on the Correct your spelling
information
value
drop of the gems and jewelleries
, Change the wording
jewellery
pieces of jewellery
while
there is a distinct
rising trend in Change the adjective
distinctly
values
of other Correct article usage
the values
products
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