The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time
The line graph depicts the number of
books
that were loaned from four libraries in four different months of 2014, the chart
also
illustrates the proportion of
books
borrowed in terms of genre.
Overall
,
it is clear that
patterns of borrowing for each library were quite varied, and the most popular genre was fiction. The pattern for Sutton Wood had noticeable fluctuations, and by the end, it increased from August to September.
Furthermore
, West Eaton and Church Mount grew steadily from fifty together and by the end of the period they had 150.
By contrast
, only Ryeslip gradually decreased from 300 to approximately 170 . Moving to the types of
books
borrowed
the
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fiction was the most popular, with 43%. Following, with 19%, of self-help and history, and science with 14% each.
Last
, we have biography
books
with only 10%
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