You bought a TV week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly.You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help Write a letter to the company in your letter ●introduce yourself ●explain the problem ●and state what action you would like from company
Dear sir
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with
TV
that Add an article
a TV
the TV
i
had bought a week ago .
I am Change the capitalization
I
loyal
customer of your shop I often buy Add an article
a loyal
electronical
equipment for my house Correct your spelling
electronic
for instance
i had
bought Verb problem
I
fridge
two Correct article usage
a fridge
month
ago.Change to a plural noun
months
In addition
to this
it is working very well and Add a comma
this,
a
biggest reason Change the article
the
that
why Correct word choice
apply
i
buy Change the capitalization
I
electronic
Add an article
the electronic
an electronic
thing
in your shop is Fix the agreement mistake
things
your shop is
well known in Remove the redundancy
apply
city
The reason Add an article
the city
i
am Change the capitalization
I
Correct your spelling
writing
wrtiting
to you TV is not working well and there is Correct your spelling
writing
big
hole in Add an article
a big
middle
of the screen second Add an article
the middle
problem
is there is no any
kind of remount Correct quantifier usage
apply
Correct your spelling
control
controll
in my box and when Correct your spelling
control
i
Change the capitalization
I
call
Wrong verb form
called
to
customer service to report the Change preposition
apply
problem
i have
not yet received any help
I would like to see the Verb problem
I
Correct your spelling
employee
employe
that did not solve my Correct your spelling
employee
problem
he must be punished and i
am afraid that you will lose a lot of customers Change the capitalization
I
with
Change preposition
if
this
mistake Correct your spelling
happened
happen
happend
again
I would be Correct your spelling
happens
Correct your spelling
grateful
greatful
if you could give me a full Correct your spelling
grateful
refound
or solve my Correct your spelling
refund
problem
Yours faithfullySubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, make sure to organize your points in a clear sequence. Start by introducing yourself and your previous positive experiences, then move on to describing the current problem in detail, and finally specify the actions you would like the company to take.
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The tone of the letter can be more polite and less confrontational. Instead of demanding punishment, you can request a resolution more diplomatically. This will maintain a professional tone.
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Address specific details more clearly. For example, mention the model of the TV and date of purchase. This will make your request more precise and actionable.
task achievement
The letter includes a detailed explanation of the problem and your expectation for a full refund or resolution.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriate, maintaining a formal tone.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, helping to maintain clarity.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.