The graph shows the percentage of 15-year-olds with low literacy (reading and writing) levels in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
demonestrates
the levels Correct your spelling
demonstrates
with
writing and reading in some countries .
Change preposition
of
Firstly
, both Ireland and Sweden have between 10 and 15 precentage
in 2003 and 2000 . Correct your spelling
per cent
Secondly
, in 2006 Ireland has
from 10 to 15 and Sweden Wrong verb form
had
has
15 . Wrong verb form
had
Also
, in 2009 both Sweden and Ireland have
Wrong verb form
had
same
numbers between 15 to 20 .
Correct article usage
the same
On the other hand
, Austria in 2000 has number
15 of precentage of low literacy and in 2003 and 2006 Wrong verb form
had
has
from 20 to 25 . Verb problem
it was
In addition
, Austria has
in 2009 maybe 25 to 30 . Wrong verb form
had
Moreover
, Denmark has in 2000 15 low literacy level
. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Besides
, the graph depicts that Denmark in 2003 and 2006 has from 15 to 20 . Denmark in 2009 has
15 not Wrong verb form
had
same
2000 , 2003 and 2006 .
Correct article usage
the same
To conclude
, not all countries have same
levels of 15 years Correct article usage
the same
old
with reading and writing .Correct word choice
apply
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