The graph shows the percentage of 15-year-olds with low literacy (reading and writing) levels in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of 15-year-olds with low literacy (reading and writing) levels in four countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
demonestrates
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demonstrates
the levels
with
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of
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writing and reading in some countries .
Firstly
, both Ireland and Sweden have between 10 and 15
precentage
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per cent
in 2003 and 2000 .
Secondly
, in 2006 Ireland
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from 10 to 15 and Sweden
has
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15 .
Also
, in 2009 both Sweden and Ireland
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same
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the same
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numbers between 15 to 20 .
On the other hand
, Austria in 2000
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had
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15 of precentage of low literacy and in 2003 and 2006
has
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it was
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from 20 to 25 .
In addition
, Austria
has
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in 2009 maybe 25 to 30 .
Moreover
, Denmark has in 2000 15 low literacy
level
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.
Besides
, the graph depicts that Denmark in 2003 and 2006 has from 15 to 20 . Denmark in 2009
has
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15 not
same
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the same
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2000 , 2003 and 2006 .
To conclude
, not all countries have
same
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the same
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levels of 15 years
old
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apply
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with reading and writing .
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