The charts beloow show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak othe languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts depict the percentages of British college
students
who were able to speak other languages
despite of
English, observed in one Change preposition
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univerity
in England, over a period of 10 years from 2000 to 2010. Correct your spelling
university
Overall
, Spanish
was the second languages
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language
students
can
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could
while
students
who able
to Add a missing verb
were able
spoke
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speak
Germany
and two other Replace the word
German
languages
had the lowest percentages over a decade of period.
According to
the data, in the innitial
year, most Correct your spelling
initial
of
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university
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the university
students
mainly spoke Spanish
as their second language
with percentage
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a percentage
the percentage
at
30%, Change preposition
of
then
rose 5
% Change preposition
to 5
in
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the
10 years later. Correct article usage
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Likewise
Spanish
, students
who were able to speak another language
also
increased in the same proportion such
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Spanish
.
On the other hand
, university students
who can spoke
French and no other Change the verb form
speak
language
,
witnessed Remove the comma
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decline
at 10% and 5% respectively, and reached 10% for both Correct article usage
a decline
ability
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abilities
However
, since the first of
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the
stage, the rates of university Correct article usage
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students
who can spoke
two other Change the verb form
speak
languages
and German remained stable along
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for
century
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a century
To conclude
, students
who were able to speak Spanish
and another
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another language
other languages
languages
improved 5
%, and Change preposition
by 5
Spanish
marked
as the second Add a missing verb
was marked
languages
that Fix the agreement mistake
language
students
can
use after English. Wrong verb form
could
In contrast
with
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students
who unable
to Add a missing verb
were unable
spoke
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language
, German, French, other languages
had the same proportions at 10%.Submitted by pratiwi.fadhilah11 on
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