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The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar short
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 key information about the number of female candidates pursuing higher
education
 in five different countries: the United Kingdom, the United States,
Canada
, Japan, and Germany,
into
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in
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 two specific years 1970 and 2005. The units are measured in ratio
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
Canada
 and the United Kingdom had the most higher
education
 in 2005, approximately 60%.
Canada
 over the course of 15 years, from 1970 to 2005 had the highest proportion
in
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education
, almost 60% of female
students
 in both countries attended higher learning,
whereas
Japan
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in Japan
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 in the year 1970
less
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students
attend
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 higher
education
 institutes, the figure doubled in 2005 where one in four female Japanese
students
 joined the same realm of
education
.
According to
 what is shown, the count of female
students
 in Germany numbered just below 60 in 1970 and 2005.
Moreover
, in 1970, the figure of female candidates in the United Kingdom and the United States was half
to
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that of
Canada
 (30%); the count doubled in 2005 reaching
at
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the same level as
Canada
 and Germany.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, canada, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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