The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart illustrated shows how much money
britsh citizins
spend on fast food per week, Correct your spelling
British citizens
while
the line graph provided below states the trends of
fast food consumption. In general, looking at the bar chart there is a high level in Change preposition
in
high income
consumers at just above 40 Add a hyphen
high-income
pences
in a week with hamburgers compared to the Correct your spelling
pence
pieces
low income
consumers at about 14. Moving on to the line graph below it is shown how many grammes have been consumed in the past 4 decades ranging from 1970-1990 with yet again a sharp increase with hamburgers, compared to the Fish and Chips Add a hyphen
low-income
having
a Change the form of the verb
had
more slowwer
decrease with Change the word
slower
fluctation
.Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
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