The line chart illustrates the labour force employment in five economic sectors during the period from 1930 to 2010 in USA. These five economic sectors include industrial sector, sales and office, farming and fishing and foresting, technical sector, and other services.

The line chart illustrates the labour force employment in five economic sectors during the period from 1930 to 2010 in USA. These five economic sectors include industrial sector, sales and office, farming and fishing and foresting, technical sector, and other services.
The provided chart depicts the changes in various fields people, who live in the U.S., work in between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, the number of people pursuing farming, fishing and foresting decreased dramatically,
while
other fields experienced a rise in the working staff. By the end of the period, the dominating
labour
forces in employment were industrial and technical jobs,
whereas
farming fell to the
last
place in quantity.
According to
the data, the
labour
forces that achieved growth were the industrial, the technical and the sales and office
sector
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sectors
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. The number of employees working in the industrial and the technical
labour
forces tripled, achieving a quantity of approximately 35 and 30
millions
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million
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, respectively. Returning to the remaining data, both farming, fishing and foresting staff and people working in other services decreased.
While
labour
associated with farming suffered a significant fall of 75 million in the working staff, the number of workers for other services went down steadily with a change of 2 million.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • labour force employment
  • economic sectors
  • industrial sector
  • sales and office
  • farming and fishing and foresting
  • technical sector
  • other services
  • general trend
  • consistent rises or falls
  • dramatically declined
  • rural economies
  • shifts in labor demand
  • industrial boom
  • recessions
  • outsourcing trends
  • post-World War II
  • digital age
  • consumer-driven economy
  • socio-economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • broad socio-economic trends
  • globalization
  • consumer habits
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