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You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.

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 wrong order and bad service yesterday night.
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suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter should be polite and professional, even when expressing dissatisfaction. Avoid using strong negative words like 'annoyant.'
complete response
Try to elaborate more on what exactly went wrong with the meal and the service. Providing specific examples will make your complaint clearer.
logical structure
Organize your letter into distinct paragraphs for each point: explanation of purpose, description of the issue, and suggestions for improvement. This will improve clarity and readability.
greeting and closing
Make sure your letter has a clear opening and closing. Begin with a polite salutation, and end with a respectful closing statement such as 'Sincerely,' followed by your name.
complete response
The letter directly addresses the problem, which is a good start to a clear and effective complaint.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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