The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak pther languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak pther languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the
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comparison
of British
students
at one university in England who were able to speak
languages
other than primary English in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that both years have
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speakers to the same highest proportions,
while
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in German only and two other
languages
were
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remainly
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remained
stable. In terms of Europe
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languages
,
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speakers
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the percentages in both 2000 and 2010,
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for 30% and 35%, respectively.
Furthermore
,
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speakers, which
they
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actually
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a great prospect in 2000 gathered 15% of the percentages, it
then
experienced a slight decline to 10% in 2010.
Lastly
,
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students
relatively
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steady and there was no increase throughout the
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period
by collected 10%. Regarding
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,
students
who had the ability to speak in another language saw a moderate rise, since in 2000 it accounted for 10%
then
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rose
risen
up to 20% in 2010.
In contrast
,
students
who only speak English significantly decreased,
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initially
it
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recorded at exactly 20%
then
it declined successfully to 10%. Unfortunately, there was no rising accumulation towards two other
languages
speaking
students
which remained at 10%.
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