The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar chart demonstrates the ratio of females and males who successfully passed their driving test in an Asian country in 4 different
years
, particularly in 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, women
were better rather than men in all years
. Moreover
, the best result
of this
chart was presented by female drivers in 2000, while
the worst result
belongs to male drivers of
1980.
In 1980 and 1990 the percentage of Change preposition
in
women
who passed driving
test was nearly the same, approximately 50% and above 50% respectively. Correct article usage
the driving
However
, women
who took driving test
in 2000 were more lucky and their number increased, Fix the agreement mistake
tests
as a
result
, about 70% of them gained the
driving license. Correct article usage
a
In addition
, this
was the highest result
in both genders in all years
. Slight
decrease was seen in 2010, so the proportion was equal to around 65%.
Men were not that good at driving, Add an article
A slight
The slight
as a consequence
, their results were always lower than women
's. It should be mentioned that the fewest amount of males could pass exam
in 1980, particularly under 30%. But their performance was better in 1990 when nearly 37% of them passed the exam. Add an article
the exam
an exam
Finally
, in 2000 and 2010 after a noticeable growth, the figure constituted almost 50% in both years
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