The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart demonstrates the ratio of females and males who successfully passed their driving test in an Asian country in 4 different
years
, particularly in 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
,
women
were better rather than men in all
years
.
Moreover
, the best
result
of
this
chart was presented by female drivers in 2000,
while
the worst
result
belongs to male drivers
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1980. In 1980 and 1990 the percentage of
women
who passed
driving
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test was nearly the same, approximately 50% and above 50% respectively.
However
,
women
who took driving
test
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in 2000 were more lucky and their number increased,
as a
result
, about 70% of them gained
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driving license.
In addition
,
this
was the highest
result
in both genders in all
years
.
Slight
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decrease was seen in 2010, so the proportion was equal to around 65%. Men were not that good at driving,
as a consequence
, their results were always lower than
women
's. It should be mentioned that the fewest amount of males could pass
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in 1980, particularly under 30%. But their performance was better in 1990 when nearly 37% of them passed the exam.
Finally
, in 2000 and 2010 after a noticeable growth, the figure constituted almost 50% in both
years
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, women, result with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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