You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
#minutes #gym #neighbourhood #manager #membership #prices #activities #procedure #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to enquire about the way of
btaining
Correct your spelling
obtaining
gym
Correct article usage
a gym
memebership
.
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membership
To begin
, I would like to know more information about the type of Correct your spelling
membership
memebership
packages available including the prices to make my purchasing Correct your spelling
membership
Correct your spelling
decision
decisions
decisison
comparing other places because my monthly budget is limited for Correct your spelling
decision
this
activity and I am not in a position to spend more money on it
Secondly
, my primary purpose of obtaining memebership
would be being fit than Correct your spelling
membership
body building
as I have limited time for Correct your spelling
bodybuilding
this
activity from my day
schedule. Replace the word
daily
Also
, I am planning to keep it for longer
duration than Add an article
a longer
certain
period so kindly provide me Correct article usage
a certain
Change preposition
with ativities
ativities
available to achieve Correct your spelling
activities
this objectives
.
Per my knowledge,joining Change the determiner
this objective
these objectives
to
a gym Change preposition
apply
involve
Correct subject-verb agreement
involves
ceratin
steps and knowing these are in detail will enable me to complete the Correct your spelling
certain
require
things without any gaps.
It would be Change the form of the verb
required
grate
if you could provide me Correct your spelling
great
the
details at your earliest Add the preposition
with the
convinience
.
I look Correct your spelling
convenience
Correct your spelling
forward
forwarde
to Correct your spelling
forward
here
from you
Yours faithfully
AravindaCorrect your spelling
hear
Submitted by aravindasajith on
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spelling
Revise spelling mistakes like 'memebership' (membership) and 'convinience' (convenience).
structure
Structure your letter by creating clear, separate paragraphs for each query (membership types, activities, and joining procedure) to enhance readability.
clarity
Clarify and expand slightly on your third point regarding the joining procedure to ensure complete clarity for the reader.
tone
The tone of your letter is polite and suitable for the context.
content
You have included all the required information in your letter, which ensures that your task response is comprehensive.
structure
You opened and closed the letter appropriately, which adds to the formal structure.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.