You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The two line graphs depict data regarding New Zealand
import
from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.
Fix the agreement mistake
imports
Overall
, imports
from Australia has
shown Correct subject-verb agreement
have
increase
since the start of Add an article
an increase
period
, with Add an article
the period
a period
fluctuation
of Correct article usage
a fluctuation
trend
by Add an article
the trend
a trend
dip
down in the middle, even though it has Correct article usage
a dip
raised
at Verb problem
risen
end
. Add an article
the end
Although
,
Remove the comma
apply
Imports
from Japan has
showed Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
a comparetively
comparetively
similar trend at Correct your spelling
comparatively
start
, Add an article
the start
it
decreased sharply Correct pronoun usage
they
begining
Correct your spelling
beginning
of
2000 until Change preposition
in
further
.
To begin
with, Australian imports
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
showed
a steady increase since 1994. Change the verb form
shown
This
started nearly at NZ
$ 4000 million
, then
rose sharply until in
1996, at which point that Change preposition
apply
dip
dramatically with almost Replace the word
dipped
a
Correct article usage
apply
half-way
from Correct your spelling
halfway
NZ
$6500 to 3000 million
in 1999. It escalated dramatically afterward
, and it Change the spelling
afterwards
peak
Change the verb form
peaks
NZ
$8000 millon
in 2004 with Correct your spelling
million
Correct article usage
a substanial
substanial decrese
in 2002.
Correct your spelling
substantial decrease
In contrast
, New Zealand imports
began the period at NZ
$3000 million
and showed a rose sharply, then
purpassed
Correct your spelling
passed
NZ
$6000 million
in middle
of Correct article usage
the middle
year
1997, which became continuel fluctuation between 1997 and 2000. Even if Change the article
the year
this
trend reached to
Change preposition
apply
NZ
$6000 million
point, it fell markedly until next
four years duration in 2004.Correct article usage
the next
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Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, nz, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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