The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two pie
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illustrate the ratio of various types of
energy
production
in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, in both years coal and gas accounted for over half of all
energy
creation,
while
least
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was
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other
energy
sources. There was only a very minimal increase in
production
from gas and coal,
whereas
nuclear and other sources almost doubled. Petrol was the only
energy
source to decrease over the period.
Energy
produced by coal comprised
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29.80% in 1995 and by 2005, it increased by about 1 % to 30.9%.
Likewise
, the amount of
energy
generated by gas went up by approximately 1% from 29.63% in the first year to 30.1% by the final year. The use of nuclear power rose significantly from 6.40% in 1995 to 10.10% in 2005. Other sources of
energy
production
accounted for 4.90% but
then
climbed to 9.10%. Petrol,
on the other hand
, produced 29.27% of all the
energy
in 1995 but after a decade only 19.55% of
energy
came from
this
source.
Nevertheless
, petrol stayed in the third place of the
production
.
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