The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate information about the rate of
British
students
who can speak other languages in addition
to English
at one university in England in 2000 and 2010. Overall
, people were able to speak bilingual, which was the most popular in the two surveyed years.
To begin
with the first chart, there was 60% of individuals, who were bilingual in 2000. Among these, the majority of British
students
can communicate in English
and Spanish at 20%. Moreover
, students
who spoke French and English
were equal with
individuals Change preposition
to
used
another language Correct pronoun usage
who used
in addition
to English
. The rest proportion in the bilingual people were students
who spoke German and English
. There were approximately one-third students
, who only used English
for communication. Besides
, there were only 10% British
Change preposition
of British
students
communicated in three languages.
Turning toward the second graph, It is readily apparent that students
, who were bilingual, were the most popular at half of the total people in 2010. British
students
used French, German and Spanish without English
are similar at 10%. While
students
, who spoke another language, accounted for 20%. It is worth noting that the proportion of students
who were able to speak three languages increased from 10% to 15% after 10 years. Meanwhile, the ratio of students
who only spoke English
also
rose by 5% during the observation periods.Submitted by duongntt.tld on
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