The given line chart delineates the proportion of Australian exports with four different nations, namely Japan, The US, China and India, from 1990 to 2012.

The given line chart delineates the proportion of Australian exports with four different nations, namely Japan, The US, China and India, from 1990 to 2012.
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The presented line chart compares data about the percentage of goods that Australia sent to 4 various countries that are Japan, The US,
China
and India, between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, it was important that
China
and India
instead
of the others had increasing trends over the period of 22 years;
moreover
, Japan for several times had the first level of export from Australia.
According to
the diagram, Japan, the main country that had a large fraction in 1990, hit nearly 26% in the beginning;
then
it reduced moderately to about 17%. The second country in 1990 was The USA;
furthermore
, it scored roughly upper 10% in 1990;
thereafter
, it declined to 8% in 1995 after that, recording the same portion as the start in 2000;
nevertheless
, its fashion dipped slightly and hit the nadir at nearly 5% in 2000; it climbed to almost 6%. The graph demonstrates that
China
, the third one, touched a tiny fraction in 1990 and leapt overwhelmingly to the first stage at 28%. India, having the same trend as
China
, hit nearly zero at the start;
additionally
, its proportion stabilized until 2000. Later it rose and peaked at 8% in 2010;
then
it went down approximately to 5%.
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