The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Diagram

Firstly

, the diagram given depicts the percentage of people who graduated from Brighton University that

joining

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multiple

employement

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employment

fields in 2019.

Secondly

, as we can see, there were only four

aspect

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that

reach

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more than 10% and it begins with service industries

that

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were the most favourite area for the individuals that they

find

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out after

graduated

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and the number

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one third

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of all participants.

Next,

the second biggest proportion

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manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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industry, followed by education and

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, politics &

goverment

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government

which respectively around 16.3%, 14.7% and 12.1%.

Subsequently

, the number of transportation and

warehouse

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were quite similar with science and

techonology

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technology

around 7.8% and 7.3%

sequently

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respectively

.

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,

other

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the other

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sectors number were 2.8 % and twice

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it

were

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given to civil service

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5.6%.

Finally

, the

last

bottom two which only under 1% nominated to charity with 0.3% and closed by sport with just 0.1%.

Overall

, there are ten sectors provided which the largest and the smallest respectively are service industry and sport area.