The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Diagram
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Firstly
, the diagram given depicts the percentage of people who graduated from Brighton University that joining
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joined
employement
fields in 2019.
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employment
Secondly
, as we can see, there were only four aspect
that Change to a plural noun
aspects
reach
more than 10% and it begins with service industries Wrong verb form
reached
that
were the most favourite area for the individuals that they Correct pronoun usage
apply
find
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graduated
and the number Wrong verb form
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one third
of all participants. Add a hyphen
one-third
Next,
the second biggest proportion were
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was
manufacturing
industry, followed by education and Correct article usage
the manufacturing
then
, politics & goverment
which respectively around 16.3%, 14.7% and 12.1%.
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government
Subsequently
, the number of transportation and warehouse
were quite similar with science and Fix the agreement mistake
warehouses
techonology
around 7.8% and 7.3% Correct your spelling
technology
sequently
. Correct your spelling
respectively
Morever
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Moreover
other
sectors number were 2.8 % and twice Correct article usage
the other
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were
given to civil service Correct subject-verb agreement
was
for
5.6%. Change preposition
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Finally
, the last
bottom two which only under 1% nominated to charity with 0.3% and closed by sport with just 0.1%.
Overall
, there are ten sectors provided which the largest and the smallest respectively are service industry and sport area.Submitted by pumasembiring on
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