WRITING WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Grams per person per week Fish and meat consumption 300 250 200 50 150 大家 Chicken .com Beef 100 Lamb 50 Fish 0 1979 1984 1989 1994 1999 2004
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The line graph presents data about meat and Fish
consumption
in one European country From 1979 to 2004 .
overall
, the
chicken Correct article usage
apply
consumption
has been on the rise throughout the Years, But as for beef and lamb
the numbers are declining at a similar rate, Add a comma
lamb,
whereas
Fish Consumption
remains Steady.
In detail, beef consumption
started at almost 210 grams
a week per Person but the number Kept Fluctuating down
to nearly Change preposition
apply
a
100 Correct article usage
apply
grams
in 2004.
chicken and lamb consumption
in 1979 was the same with approximately150 grams
per person, Yet the chicken line Kept escalating reaching 250 grams
by 2004 , but the reverse is true for lamp
which witnessed a dramatic decrease over the Years
Finishing at virtually 70 Add an article
the lamp
a lamp
grams
by 2004 , Fish on the other hand
remained relatively stable at 50 grams
per person each week .Submitted by omniah15 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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