WRITING WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Grams per person per week Fish and meat consumption 300 250 200 50 150 大家 Chicken .com Beef 100 Lamb 50 Fish 0 1979 1984 1989 1994 1999 2004

The line graph provided demonstrates how much

does

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apply

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the

Correct article usage

apply

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european

Change the capitalization

European

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people

consume

Wrong verb form

consumed

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four

kind

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kinds

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of

meat

chicken, beef, lamb and fish in the period between 1979

to

Correct word choice

and

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2004.

Overall

we can see that people consume chicken and beef the most meanwhile, fish consumption

is

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has been

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almost stable throughout the years and it holds the place for the lowest consumed

meat

. Chicken started

of

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off

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in early 1979 with 150

grams

per person per week and it

experineced

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experienced

a linear increase to reach almost 250

grams

and

becoming

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became

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the most consumed

meat

. Beef has fluctuated as it was the highest with almost 220

grams

then

it started to decrease to reach the point of 120

grams

, Lamb

also

sufferd

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suffered

a decrease in consumption. But for

fish

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fish,

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it still function as the least consumed

meat

but the

grams

consumed didn't change dramatically.