The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
A glance at the accompanying data indicates the percentage of
export
to 4 countries from Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Australia
between 1990 and 2012. Overall
, Australia
exports to China and India have grown from starting points at the completion of the time present. Japan and Change noun form
Australia's
US
, Correct article usage
the US
on the other hand
, had fallen marginally.
Looking in more detail, in 1990 Australia
exported less than 5% to China and slightly more than its export
to India. Fix the agreement mistake
exports
However
, from 2000 to 2010 shipping to China upsurged surprassing
two states for more than a quarter. Exporting to Japan, Correct your spelling
surpassing
surprising
on the other hand
, had started decline
Fix the infinitive
to decline
20
% in 1995 and since Change preposition
by 20
then
the rate almost unchanged. Althought
Correct your spelling
Although
US
had Correct article usage
the US
drop
in Change the verb form
dropped
same
year Add an article
the same
with
Japan to about 9%, Change preposition
as
its
Correct pronoun usage
it
increase
in 2000 before plunging and rebounding marginally in 2012 for a final value Replace the word
increased
just
over 5%.
Change preposition
of just
India
imports from Change noun form
India's
Australia
recorded small numbers percentage over a quarter century but its progress beginning
in 2000, reaching a peak of 6% through Wrong verb form
began
US
before little dropping in 2012.Correct article usage
the US
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
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