Furthermore, Beligium hit the change in male job market of with percentage of 60% that was highest among the four nations in male employment, but in reverse gender it was only 1% change. Neverthless,USA recorded 18% boost in male jobs market and female recorded declined of 2% in 2000.

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important for every person, but

due to

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it is hard to afford for medium families. Private hospital provides the best

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at their earliest needs

nevertheless

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high and out of budget for poor people. In

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the

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care

and services for private

hospitals

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as compared to their unaffordability and

others

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demerits. To embark on, private

hospitals

have more modern

facilities

and instruments for doing surgeries without any

queue

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, and

in

addition

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patients will get

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care

after surgery to

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recover. They will provide proper physiotherapies and other related

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that help the

patient

to recover after

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.

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, in private

hospitals

patient

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get more doctors team to consult with them

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their disease,

while

in government

hospital

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they are always short of staff and appliances that the

patient

pays

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their

health

.

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needs

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to pay a big amount of money from their pocket. For illustration, in a university report

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recorded that private

hospitals

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cost

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same

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treatment

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200% more than

the

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public

hospital

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hospitals

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.

Furthermore

, to run the staff and to buy the best

facilities

without any

queue

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private

hospitals

have to charge

patient

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more than the public hospital.

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in private

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hospital

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they need to pay a lot of wages to maintain the excellence of their venue. Private hospital provides the best accommodation and hygiene environment to the

patient

unlike in public

hospital

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hospitals

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patient

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being placed in shared

room

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with inadequate

health

facilities

.

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it was shown that private

hospitals

are cleaner and environment free

that

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help

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the

patient

to get better in their hard days of

declined

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health

in spite of all missing in public

hospital

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.

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, to run these

facilities

hospital needs to charge a lot of amounts to the

patient

.

These hospital

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can be costly, but the advantages

such

as

care

and shorter waiting times, significantly outweigh the

disadvantage

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. We can say that private hospital provides more effective

health

care

.