The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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with Other

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who got into full-time jobs

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after

passing from a certain Australian university,

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the chart compares their average income between the

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2004 and 2012.

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more than three quarters of the

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graduates

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get the full-time work after passing from the university

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period with

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minor increase in the year 2008.

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to

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, 65% of the other group of people started

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full-time job in 2004.Their number increased significantly in the next 2 years ,surpassing the

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in 2006 , after which it

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to end the period at approximately the same level as it was in 2004. Both the groups of people were getting on average the same amount of salary of $41000 in the year 2004.

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salaries of both groups increased during the mentioned period ,

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graduates

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salary

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increased more rapidly than Other

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and

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$56000 in 2012

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to $51000

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other

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