The graphs below show the percentage of graduates that got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia, and the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration compares the proportion of
Math
graduates
with Other graduates
who got into full-time jobs afte
passing from a certain Australian university, Correct your spelling
after
while
the chart compares their average income between the year
2004 and 2012.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Slighlty
more than three quarters of the Correct your spelling
Slightly
Math
graduates
get the full-time work after passing from the university through out
the Correct your spelling
throughout
mentoned
period with Correct your spelling
mentioned
only
minor increase in the year 2008. Add an article
an only
Compare
to Wrong verb form
Compared
Math
graduates
, 65% of the other group of people started the
full-time job in 2004.Their number increased significantly in the next 2 years ,surpassing the Correct article usage
a
Math
graduates
in 2006 , after which it fells
Correct your spelling
fell
constanly
to end the period at approximately the same level as it was in 2004.
Both the groups of people were getting on average the same amount of salary of $41000 in the year 2004.Correct your spelling
constantly
Although
salaries of both groups increased during the mentioned period , but
Remove the conjunction
apply
Math
graduates
Change noun form
graduate's
graduates'
salary
increased more rapidly than Other Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
graduates
and was
$56000 in 2012 Change the verb form
were
compare
to $51000 Change the form of the verb
compared
of
other Change preposition
for
graduates
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