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Task 1 The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1 The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph
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illustrates
 the
number
 of
citiznes
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citizens
 in
China
 and
India
 between 2000 and today and
expected
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 changes in population by the
year
 2050. It can be clearly seen that both countries will have an increase in the
number
 of their residents.
China
 will reach
the
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its
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peak
 in 2030
while
India
 will reach
the
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peak
 in 2050. In 2000,
China
 started with a population of 1250
billion
 people and gradually increased over time and
expected
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 to reach a
peak
 of 1450
billion
 residents by the
year
 2030. The
number
 of people in
China
 is anticipated to
experince
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experience
 a gradual decrease over a
twenteey-
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twenty-year
year
 period before
finally
 standing at 1390
billion
 in the
year
 2050.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of citizens in
India
 in 2000
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with
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at
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 only 1000
billion
 before
experincing
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experiencing
 a rapid and
signficant
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significant
 incline
by
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of
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 40% over a
twenteey-five-
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twenty-five-year
year
 period before reaching a
peak
 today
at1400
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at 1400
billion
. The population in
India
 is expected to
contniou
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continue
 to rise by 60% from the
year
 2000 before reaching a high of 1600
billion
 in the
year
 2050.
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