The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of males and females arrested in the UK from 2015- 2020 and the bar chart shows the reasons for these people's arrest. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information about the percentage of people arrested in the UK between 2015 and 2020 and the line graph shows 6 different reasons for their arrest.
It is clear that
more males were arrested than females for 5 years.
Also
, both men and women showed the highest proportion
in
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of
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public intoxication, with around 30% and 37% respectively. Focusing on the pie charts, the police arrested 32% of males,
whereas
they caught only 9% of the other gender from 2015 to 2020.
In other words
, 91% of women didn't commit any crime during the time period, neither 68% of males. Moving on to the line graph, after public intoxication, the second most frequent reason why men got arrested was driving
drinking
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and drinking
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, comprising over 20%. It was followed by other reasons, breaking and entering, assault, and theft.
However
, women's second most
commited
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committed
crime was
assualt
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assault
, which accounted for almost 20%.
Furthermore
, the proportions of breaking and entering and theft were slightly over 10%.
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