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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given graph compares the amount of timber, paper, and pulp produced in Europe from 1980 to 2000.
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it is clear that
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 the production of timber and paper continued to climb,
while
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 the pulp's trend fluctuated over the period. 
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, the production of paper started at 4
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980, followed by a small increase to 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985, and continued to rise to 9
million
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tonnes
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 before experiencing a drop to 8
million
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tonnes
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 in 1995. It reached a peak of 12
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000. Turning to the pulp, it began at approximately 6
million
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tonnes
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,
then
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 sharply decreased to 2.5
million
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tonnes
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. Afterwards, it showed considerable growth to 8
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990, which stayed unchanged until 2000
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 and reached the highest production at 12
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
According to
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 the timber, it reached a peak of 10
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985,
then
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 the figure plunged to approximately 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 1995
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 and
subsequently
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 rose to 8
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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