The line graph shows value changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000, while the second line chart shows employment status in the same industry.
The graph illustrates a number of
value
changes in the Use synonyms
UK
steel industry from 1970 to 2000, Use synonyms
while
the second chart depicts Linking Words
a
amount of employment status in the same industry.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, in the
first chart Linking Words
UK
demand and Use synonyms
UK
production has a downward tendency over the period, Use synonyms
while
it is the reverse for imports. If we look at the second graph, it can be seen easily employment status sharply decreased throughout the period.
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According to
the line graph, Linking Words
UK
demand and Use synonyms
UK
production started from 200000 and 160000 in 1970, dramatically dipped until 1990, and levelled off during the next 10 years. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, imports shown with its lowest Linking Words
value
in 1970 , Use synonyms
then
increased sharply during 30 years and hit a peak Linking Words
value
of 70000 Use synonyms
at the end
Linking Words
Furthermore
, the Employment status in the Linking Words
UK
given 50000 with its highest Use synonyms
value
in 1970, Use synonyms
nevertheless
it significantly climbed to 17000 in 2000.Linking Words
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