The line graph shows value changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000, while the second line chart shows employment status in the same industry.
The graph illustrates a number of
value
changes in the UK
steel industry from 1970 to 2000, while
the second chart depicts a
amount of employment status in the same industry.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, in the
first chart UK
demand and UK
production has a downward tendency over the period, while
it is the reverse for imports. If we look at the second graph, it can be seen easily employment status sharply decreased throughout the period.
According to
the line graph, UK
demand and UK
production started from 200000 and 160000 in 1970, dramatically dipped until 1990, and levelled off during the next 10 years. On the other hand
, imports shown with its lowest value
in 1970 , then
increased sharply during 30 years and hit a peak value
of 70000 at the end
Furthermore
, the Employment status in the UK
given 50000 with its highest value
in 1970, nevertheless
it significantly climbed to 17000 in 2000.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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