The line graph shows value changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000, while the second line chart shows employment status in the same industry.

The image provided above depicts two line graphs. The first one gives information about the variations in the

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volume

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of the produced or imported

steel

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along with

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the total

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of

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steel

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in the

UK

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between 1970 and 2000.

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, the recrution rate in the

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steel

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industry is revealed in the second graph.

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demand

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for

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experinced

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experienced

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during the examined period. The curve can be

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into three phases of reduction; with 200000

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of

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in the first year, it fell moderately for a

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,

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it plummeted abruptly to slightly above 100000. it is observable that for the

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remaining

time, the total

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was stable by approximately

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off at 100

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tons

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.

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,

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factories in the

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shrank their

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;

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starting

at over 150

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tons

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, it steadily decreased to under 100

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by 1990, and

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kept its falling rate in the

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decade

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. Now turning our attention to other data, importation correlated negatively with the total

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. The rate of purchasing

steel

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from foreign countries met three levels of rise. In the

comencement

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commencement

, it was merely above zero, gradually rising for 30 years, it touched the maximum of almost 80

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tons

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in 2000. Interestingly, As

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UK

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tended to buy more

steel

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from other companies, the number of employees decreased constantly. 50

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employees were employed in

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industry in 1970,

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number

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lessened

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constantly until the end of the period, but

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different paces for different years. in the middle

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, it fell hastily compared to the first and the

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decade

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. in the

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decade

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, with a modest drop, it ended at under 20

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workers.

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, the more the

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volume

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of

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production fell in the

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, the

less

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people had

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jobs

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in the industry. And the country was eager to import more.of

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.