YThe two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

YThe two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The illustrations provide
informatin
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information
about the exportation data in a decade to New Zealand from two countries, Australia and Japan.
Overall
, both graphs show how imports varied between 1994 and 2004,
while
the first rose and fell erratically, the second one suffered fewer changes.  Taking a closer look at the data
showed
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on top it can clearly seen that during the first
year
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year,
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the changes were marginal,
then
it
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they
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abruply
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obviously
rose when suddenly in early 1996 declined until 1999, touching the nadir. It could be
notticed
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noticed
noted
that for the following year it skyrocketed, when all of a sudden dropped again and,
subsequently
climbed reaching the
maxima
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at 8000 NZ dollars. Now, focusing on the picture of
Japan
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Japan's
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exports, it can be appreciated that between 1994 and 1997 imports grew gradually hitting
the
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peak at 6000 NZ dollars. After that, it experienced a
slowly
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plunge until 1999
,
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when it surged again and in 2000 it plummeted for a year, afterwards it
leveled
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off. To summarize, the ups and downs of both countries in almost at the same time;
nevetheless
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nevertheless
,
at
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in
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the end New Zealand ended up spending 6000 NZ dollars more in Australia than in Japan.
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