You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The aim of
this
report is to summarize which employment sectors
graduates of Brighton University chose in the year 2019, compare and contrast dominating fields in the pie chart besides
giving
a general overview of the data.
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Overall
we can immediately see that service
industries make up a third of jobs taken by Brighton University graduates. The second highest ranking sector is the manufacturing industry with about half as many employees as service
industries. Politics and government as well as
education are the substantial runner ups
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runner-ups
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% difference. With the lesser being education at almost 15%. Science and technology with transportation and warehousing have about the same values, teetering at around seven Correct article usage
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percent
. The least picked jobs are in the charity and sports Change the spelling
per cent
sectors
, with the latter grossing only 0.1 percent
of university alumni. Unspecified Change the spelling
per cent
sectors
and civil service
combined make up nearly ten percent
of job acceptions.
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per cent
To conclude
the most picked sector is public administration industries, with the other major ones being manufacturing, politics and government, and education. On the flip side: transportation and warehousing, science and technology, civil service
, charity, sports, and unspecified sectors
make up a minority in the pie chart.Submitted by oimigle on
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