The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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graph and the pie chart illustrate the

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of books

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and the type by four different libraries, respectively, in

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months.

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is appreciated that reading interest fluctuated

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the summer,

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, fiction books were the most wanted. Taking a look at the first representation it could be seen that some places were more into reading than others.

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, West Eaton and Church Mount went hand in hand slowly increasing,

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the trends were different. Both started borrowing 50 books,

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the amount

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, by August 150 copies were provided in West Eaton, and that

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that number got reached in September.

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interest gradually

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months went by, starting from 300 and ending with fewer than 200 exemplary.

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the number started at 250 in June, slightly climbed to 275 the following month,

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plummeted in August touching the nadir at 100.

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, it grew achieving a higher amount than the beginning.

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, fiction novels were on top

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43%,

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biography was the second most wanted

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19%. Plus, historical and science novels were 14% and self-help a 10%. To summarize, people were willing to spend time reading mostly fiction, in some places more than others.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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5 paragraphs

236 words

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