The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The aim of
this
report is to analyse the Linking Words
employment
Use synonyms
sectors
of Use synonyms
graduates
from Brighton University in 2019.
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Overall
, the graph indicates that among Linking Words
graduates
there is a clear leading Use synonyms
employment
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sector
of Service industries making up over a third of the pie graph. The second most popular Use synonyms
employment
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sector
is the Manufacturing industry with approximately twice less of Use synonyms
graduates
choosing it. Moving on, two Use synonyms
sectors
are standing pretty close with Education employing 14,7% of Use synonyms
graduates
and Use synonyms
Politics
& government Correct article usage
the Politics
sector
being just below at 12,1% of Use synonyms
graduates
. There are two more Use synonyms
sectors
with just about the same Use synonyms
employment
statistics, that being Transportation and warehousing standing at 7,8% and Science & technology just beneath with 7,3% of Use synonyms
graduates
being employed . As shown in the pie chart, a very small number of Use synonyms
graduates
' Use synonyms
employment
goes to the Use synonyms
sector
of Civil service - 5,3% and even smaller numbers to the Charity and Use synonyms
Sport
Fix the agreement mistake
Sports
sectors
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, a Linking Words
little
part of Correct word choice
small
graduates
, accumulating 2,8%, belong to a Use synonyms
sector
called “Other”, Use synonyms
therefore
, they are employed Linking Words
elsewhere
.
Generally, the largest part of Linking Words
graduates
from Brighton University were employed in the Use synonyms
sector
of Service industries and the smallest part in Sport.Use synonyms
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