You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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the graphs illustrate the differences between
men
and women in the UK in spending Use synonyms
time
for leisure and household Use synonyms
activities
in 2008.
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Overall
, UK's males spent more Linking Words
time
on Use synonyms
leisuring
than females, Correct your spelling
leisure
while
domestic chores saw an opposite scenario. Linking Words
Moreover
, the disparity in average Linking Words
minutes
per Use synonyms
day
for entertaining between them was smaller than that in doing household Use synonyms
activities
.
Looking at the charts in more detail, in terms of leisure Use synonyms
activites
, it took Correct your spelling
activities
men
about nearly 140 Use synonyms
minutes
daily for media like TV, Use synonyms
video
, and Correct word choice
and video
woman
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women
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apply
spen
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spent
on
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apply
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less amount Linking Words
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time
. Reading books and is the Change preposition
of time
unconcentrate
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concentrated
activities
, both Use synonyms
them
showed similar figures for reading, at roughly 20 Change the pronoun
they
minutes
per Use synonyms
day
.
Taking household tasks into consideration, women in the UK spent most of their Use synonyms
time
on cooking and washing, at nearly 80 Use synonyms
minutes
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, which was more than twice Use synonyms
as
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men
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, shopping and clothes washing and ironing accounted for roughly 35 Linking Words
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of women's daily Use synonyms
time
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whereas
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men
spent about 25 and 10 Use synonyms
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activities
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activity
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