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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting
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The charts provide key information about british leaners, in 2000 and 2010 at single university who were able to speak other
languages
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 with English. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that spanish is still demonestraiting in the ten years with a litle rise.
In addition
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, it's seems that there are an increese from the students from various contries,
whereas
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 no other
language
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 has been decreased.
According to
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 what is shown, there was a slightely growth in spanish and another
language
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, spanish rose by 5% in the ten years which suppurt it's first rank between other
languages
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. For the same percent people who speak another
language
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 did in the during the same period. In terms of students who do not talk other
languages
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 and frensh only have deen reduced, no other
language
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 was the most thing declined,
while
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 Frensh decreased by 5%.
However
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, German and people who speak two other
languages
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 are still in the same percentage in the ten years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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