The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting

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The charts provide key information about british leaners, in 2000 and 2010 at single university who were able to speak other

languages

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with English. The units are measured in percentages.

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, it is clear from the graph that spanish is still demonestraiting in the ten years with a litle rise.

In addition

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, it's seems that there are an increese from the students from various contries,

whereas

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no other

language

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has been decreased.

According to

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what is shown, there was a slightely growth in spanish and another

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, spanish rose by 5% in the ten years which suppurt it's first rank between other

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. For the same percent people who speak another

language

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did in the during the same period. In terms of students who do not talk other

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and frensh only have deen reduced, no other

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was the most thing declined,

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Frensh decreased by 5%.

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, German and people who speak two other

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are still in the same percentage in the ten years.

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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extend do you disagree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed .