Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you went to the shop/office how the employees behaved to offend you what you expect the company to do
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction towards your company staff about the poor services provided to me.I
came
your organisation on 12th December 2024 for the purpose of verifying my passport in Add the preposition
came to
thebairline
service.Correct your spelling
the airline
Hence
,it is required to submit the letter including signature and seal from the manager of your company.
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However
,After visiting your Employment Service department,I did not Linking Words
recieve
any proper information about the documents which I need to submit Correct your spelling
receive
the
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to the
process
of authentication.Use synonyms
Moreover
,the staff in the department is not aware Linking Words
the
whole Change preposition
of the
process
of documentation.Because of that,I waited in your department Use synonyms
about
2 hours and my whole Change preposition
for about
process
got delayed in the airline service.
I would like to request you to provide proper training for the Use synonyms
staffs
in your company.Fix the agreement mistake
staff
Along with
that,please make sure the employees are behaving properly.Linking Words
Due to
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the
lack of knowledge , I struggled to complete my travelling Change the word
my
process
.
Yours faithfully
Riya Use synonyms
mathew
Change the capitalization
Mathew
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to organize your letter more clearly by using separate paragraphs for each main point.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure you provide all the necessary details and structure your complaints and requests logically.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and formal, fitting the task requirements.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses the tasks asked in the prompt, mentioning the reason for the visit, the behavior of the employees, and what you expect from the company.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.