The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008.

The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The graphs illustrate the comparison
time
Use synonyms
spent, in
in
Remove the redundancy
apply
show examples
minutes
Use synonyms
per
day
Use synonyms
, by United Kingdom men and women on household and leisure
activities
Use synonyms
in 2008.
Overall
Linking Words
, the highest leisure
activities
Use synonyms
among males and females showed in 2008, by using TV, radio and video.
In contrast
Linking Words
, the lowest
time
Use synonyms
was spent on sports exercises.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
show examples
most housework
activities
Use synonyms
done by men and women in the UK were cooking and washing. The average minute spent by males on devices was 137
minutes
Use synonyms
per
day
Use synonyms
which is slightly higher than females with only 118
minutes
Use synonyms
per
day
Use synonyms
.
While
Linking Words
the
time
Use synonyms
spent in reading books is approximately similar in two groups.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, in homework
activities
Use synonyms
the highest
time
Use synonyms
spent by
female
Fix the agreement mistake
females
show examples
spent on cooking and washing
activities
Use synonyms
by just over 70
minutes
Use synonyms
per
day
Use synonyms
in comparison to the males only 30
minutes
Use synonyms
per
day
Use synonyms
which is
considerable
Add an article
a considerable
show examples
significant difference.
Submitted by khalidhxhd on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words time, minutes, day, activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: