the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant

the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant
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The line graphs provide key information about the value of Australia's trade with China, the US and
Japan
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from 2002 to 2005. The units are measured in
billion
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dollars.
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, it is clear from the graph that
Japan
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, which had a significant growth over the years.
In addition
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, for the cooperation with China, for export, it was a slightly stable market,
whereas
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for
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import, it was a fluctuating rate between 6 years.
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what is shown, Australia had a strong bond with
Japan
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, especially in
export
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, we notice in 2002, it achieved 40
billion
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until reached in 2005. For 2005,
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year was the biggest movement in trade, it was a peak around 62
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and that was a huge jump for
Japan
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. In terms of trade with the US, it had remained stable at around 40
billion
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for exports and for imports at 20
billion
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in all years and it was a shock for the market Australia.
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