You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
•say what you have learned in your present job
•suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department
•explain why you do not wish to leave the company
You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
•say what you have learned in your present job
•suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department
•explain why you do not wish to leave the company
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coherence cohesion
Enhance logical flow by using transitional phrases to clearly link ideas between paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clarity and cohesion.
task achievement
The letter responds comprehensively to all parts of the task prompt, showing a clear understanding of the requirements.
task achievement
The use of a professional and courteous tone makes the request polite and appropriate.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and sign-offs, enhancing the professionalism of the communication.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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