The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of men and women, in seven
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groups, in Great Britain eating vegetables and fruits no less than 5 times daily, as recommended by the World Health Organization (WHO), in the year 2006. The information indicates that women are more likely to eat fruits and vegetables than men in all
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groups.
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, at the
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of 75, both genders are consuming the greens almost equally,
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at the
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of 45 to 54 a lot more women than men follow the WHO guidelines. There is a climbing trend in eating garden greens over all
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groups for both males and females, reaching the peak of around 32 and 35 per cent respectively, at the ages 55 to 64.
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being 19 to 24 only around 15% of both genders consume enough fruits and vegetables each day.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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